Poland- Realistic or Imaginary?

1 Mote Gur
Holon
December 3, 2009

Mrs. Gilat Simon
Kugel High-School Principal's Office
1 Mote Gur street
Holon

Dear Ms.Gilat Simon,

I am writing to you because I wish to complaign(sp.) about the requested price for the trip to Poland. I personally know a significant amout of students that wish to join the trip but can't afford the high costs.

On the one hand, you cliam that the trip to Poland is highly important and is a MUST for every student, but on the other hand, the price you name is way beyond what most students can afford. The trip's duration is 8 days. I think that if I go by myself I will pay much less than the price you name. Because of all that, I am starting to believe that, maybe, the trip isn't organized and planned efficiently enough. I truly believe that if you really want to help you can pull some strings and lower the price significantly.

This trip is an important journey to our nation's history. I believe every student should be given an opportunity to go on this journey. Seeing all those students that can't fulfill this desire to experience, explore and learn because of an unrealistic price, truly makes me upset. I'm sure that if some efforts are made, the price will go down significantly and I'm sorry that nothing is being done about that.


The problem being said and explained, the next step is to arrange a special comittee in the ministry of education that would examine the problem and eventually offer solutions. After that, I truly expect that some changes will be made in order to reach the goal which is- lowering the price.


Thank you for reading this letter.

Truly yours,
Kobi.


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