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15 Leaders of the Nation st.
05/02/2010

"Mada" Organization
1 Mote Gur st.
Holon, Israel

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing to apply for the recently opened paramedic position.
As requested, I have all the official certifications and I personally believe I am perfectly suitable for this job. I succesfully passed CPR courses, I am a good student and I have the will to contribute and achieve. I am 17 years old and I am (an) 11th grade student in Kugel High-School.

I find this oportunity very interesting and challenging. I believe that this job will test my skills. I am a person who is attracted to challenges. Another reason for joining your ranks is the fact the I find the challenges offered very appealing. The fact that we help and support the sick and helpless really makes me feel like I am making a diffrence. This feeling is priceless to me.

One requirement that I lack, though, is experience in the field. I am barely 17 and I've never done anything like that, but I believe that my strive for exellence will compensate the shortages(ww. - my shortcomings). My skills also include working well under pressure and being detail oriented. Fitting in won't be a problem for me as well. I work well with a variety of people and have a good attitude and work ethic(s).

To sum up, I believe that what you are looking for and what I am looking for sound like a match(phr. - I would like you to rephrase this whole first sentence). I am patiently looking forward for a reply from you. I can also be reached at the numbers metioned at the bottom of the letter.


Sincerely yours,

Kobi Tavdish

052-1234567

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