Kdoshey Kahir 8 St.
Holon 16806
April 29, 2010

Columbia University Board
8 Goerge Washington St.
New York, NY

Dear Sir/Madam,

My name is Tyler Durden, I am a fresh high-school graduate,(New sentence) I am mostly interested in pshycology and medicine in general. My wish is that before I begin with my studies, I just want to take a short and fun course on the subject (phr. - I would like to take a short course in psycology before beginning my studies) in order to fell(ww.) the actual learning experience.

I believe you wonder(gr.) why it is your university I am applying to. Well, I have heard many positive compliments(ww.) about the learning enviroment in the classes as well as the excellent staff. In addition, I have many friends currently studying there, (New sentence)I honestly feel I can contribute to the great enviroment surrounding your school and gain from it as well.

An issue I would like to mention concerns the actual class and topic. I would like to know more about the course you are offering. Who is teaching it, what is the subject it focuses on and more.

To sum up, I am really looking forward to start my studies here at your University. I am also expecting an answer from you as soon as possible, we wouldn't want all the open spots in the course to run out. Would we?(phr. - not appropriate in a formal letter)

Truly Yours,

Tyler Durden

I am sure you can do much better than that.

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Daphna